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Post by adrisole martyr on Tue 09 Sep 2008, 9:01 pm

Hello there my dear,
My dear Stacey May.
I've watched you some time,
My dear Stacey May.
I notice you cry,
My dear Stacey May.
Why are you crying,
My dear Stacey May?

I stalk your nightmares
And creep in your dreams.
I'm out to get you,
Darling innocent.

I will shed your blood
Across the nightfall.
I will watch you burn
To ashes, my dear.

The tormented dreams
And the crooked grins.
My heart stops beating
Only for you, my dear.

Don't you know, sweet girl,
I love you so much..
So much I'd kill you
Just to stay with me.

But watch where you walk
For my path is black.
And watch where you dance
For my dance is death.

Hello there my dear,
My dear Stacey May.
I've watched you some time,
My dear Stacey May.
I notice you cry,
My dear Stacey May.
Why are you crying,
My dear Stacey May?

checked. phanta.
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Post by anna may tronic. on Wed 10 Sep 2008, 8:51 am

I love this, I really do acid,
It's just this.... amazingly complex relationship. Dark and scary and full of obsessive tones.
I think it has a lot of raw emotion in it and its a real achievement that you can write it and have it still be able to translate through a computer screen. It really leaps off the page.
I love it
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Post by adrisole martyr on Wed 10 Sep 2008, 11:06 am

peter pan. wrote: I love this, I really do acid,
It's just this.... amazingly complex relationship. Dark and scary and full of obsessive tones.
I think it has a lot of raw emotion in it and its a real achievement that you can write it and have it still be able to translate through a computer screen. It really leaps off the page.
I love it

i r pleased. Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. (:
I've noticed lately that I prefer poetry than stories more, because I have a wider range of writing what I feel, I think.
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