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Officially Broken

Post by lyrical_mess on Fri 26 Sep 2008, 5:46 pm

Here I sit so close to the
Drowsy kiss of midnight
Curling my hair without a care
Of impressing the notice
Of anyone but you.

I canít quite forget your face
Nor the shape it takes when
Those indescribable lips
Form the smile I keep hoping to see.

So here I sit so close to
Closing my stinging eyes but
Ignoring my own health in
Favor of venting them all out,
My thoughts of you.

Damn the daydreams and
The night ones too, because
I said, I said, I said I wouldnít
Look at anyone again
But I canít help looking at you.

Thereís a lot more to say
Than I can fully understand
And thatís deeper than I
Care to even delve.

So Iíll just shut up now
In return for one thing:
A hello and goodbye from you.
It seems so trivial and yes,
It would be, had I asked it
Of anyone but you.




Honestly, I like the first verse more than the rest of it... naww, diddums.


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Re: Officially Broken

Post by phantasmagoria on Sat 18 Oct 2008, 7:06 am

That was just.. so adorable.
nawwww

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Re: Officially Broken

Post by lyrical_mess on Sun 19 Oct 2008, 8:09 pm

I heart you. because you're the only person to comment on any of my stuff.

I'd love you even if you flamed it but i love you more because you're nice. :D

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