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Post by tea-boy. on Sat 04 Apr 2009, 5:20 am

Goodbye, dear friend,
Iíll miss you so.

Youíre sick of rusty pipes and half-sewn seams.
Just chase your dreams and Iíll be content.
Donít forget to shine on the wettest of days,
For your love remains untainted.
Unsmudged ink lines the walls of our minds.
Never forget. Never forget.

The flowers faded when you went away.
But youíre on a mission to make them stay.
Shine, dear friend, shine like you always do.
Bring peace and love to your life anew.

Chase your dreams in day and night,
Donít stop fighting the good fight.
Turn nights to days and keep alight,
Oh my Angel, be safe tonight.

Goodbye, dear friend,
Iíll miss you so.

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Re: Friend.

Post by LightningRod on Sat 04 Apr 2009, 7:08 am

So, so much better than my stuff you have pleased him

I like the line about the pipes, it's quirky and really makes the poem stand out to others in a similar genre you have pleased him

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Post by Jack Skellington on Sat 04 Apr 2009, 8:53 am

iay ;_; Meg, I love it.

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