“Losing Control”

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“Losing Control”

Post by OmegaPatty on Fri 20 Mar 2009, 10:53 pm

For those who don't know, I like to write my poetry as if they were songs. And please, no copying! I poured my heart and soul into these, and this is one of my favourites... Enjoy!


“Losing Control”

Verse 1:
Please don’t look at me,
I’m feeling so humiliated,
The clashing of my feet on floor,
My breathing was ventilated,
I fall down cold and shivering,
Emotions start flowing in one hit,
The walls cave in I’m so delirious,
Right there I think I was losing it,

Bridge:
This can be right for me,
This ain’t how it’s meant to be,

Chorus:
How am I supposed to keep going on,
Are there any days when I’ll stand strong,
My face is turning so old,
Stranded alone in this dark hole,
I am losing all control,

Verse 2:
I lay on that bed not mine,
The room illuminated is dark,
A face around me was a blur,
Pinpointing identities with no mark,
I lost all my train of thoughts,
I let it slip past me my lips,
Truth and feelings that were inside me,
Beginning to open when it rips,

Repeat Bridge

Repeat Chorus

Verse 3:
Everything that night was unfocused,
My mind was erratically disabled,
Shut me out from reality’s images,
While the people around me cradled,
Everything was beyond embarrassment,
Physically and mentally shameful now,
Though bits and pieces I can’t recall,
The experience I’ll always remember now
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