The Symphony of Suff'ring

View previous topic View next topic Go down

The Symphony of Suff'ring

Post by Flow on Sat 14 Mar 2009, 10:47 pm

Emotional explosion poetry for the win? Haha.

The Symphony of Suff'ring

shhhh....
the cold sweat runs down your spine, neck-to-neck with the shiver,
the rhythm flows through your empty veins,
thicker than blood, thinner than good intentions
intoxicated, you hide in the shadows, your lonely companion, your friend,
flogged in a well of words, you make phrases dance to your melody,
bending their backs till they break, you ruthlessly impose your heartfelt song upon them,
suffocating from claustrophobia, suff'ring in solitude, your fingers tremble to the staggering pace of the melody of battered dreams and asphyxiated love.
in this pain you are complete, without it, you're homesick.
but it's okay, just nightmare it away,
tommorow always comes,
tommorow's another day.

shhhh.....
can you hear the symphony? the orchestra climbing to its final climax?
FORTE FORTE is the knife, two inches too deep,
piano is your last dying preath,
stac-ca-to is the baton, stabbing the air,
allegro is the world watching, does anybody care?


shh-shh..-shhh....
choking on the music, wisps of emotion bleed from your eyes,
a smile crawls across your face,
finally, the pain has dulled.. night, is now day,
the strength of your tears, washed the symphony away.

Flow
New Recruit

Male
Number of posts : 5
Age : 24
Location : Between the Trees

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: The Symphony of Suff'ring

Post by Jack Skellington on Sat 14 Mar 2009, 11:15 pm

NOT COOL Wow. 5/5.

Jack Skellington
Crusader

Female
Number of posts : 3690
Age : 21
Location : The Wood Between Holidays

View user profile http://ritaskellington.tumblr.com

Back to top Go down

Re: The Symphony of Suff'ring

Post by lyrical_mess on Sat 14 Mar 2009, 11:45 pm

Comment for the sake of a comment. You know what I think.

lyrical_mess
Red Scare

Female
Number of posts : 519
Age : 25

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: The Symphony of Suff'ring

Post by Sponsored content Today at 7:41 am


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum