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Eden

Post by Isis on Sat 21 Feb 2009, 10:56 am

I've been to pet the serpent;
I've heard its seducing hiss,
Tasted that bloody apple,
From lips of my lover's kiss.

I've trekked to the edge of Earth,
Even had the urge to leap.
My fiery soul burned out,
Fallen from grace to my knees.

Plagued-left to rot-I laid there;
Out from the darkness, you came,
Lit my eyes, lifted my spirit,
Sucked the venom from my veins.

You reattached my pieces,
Vowed never to take apart.
You gave me all of yourself;
For you, I tore out my heart.

Now, as we die together,
With all of my strength, I strive,
This one last chance, to tell you:
“I've never felt more alive.”

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Re: Eden

Post by LightningRod on Sun 22 Feb 2009, 5:12 am

NOT COOL
Wow...that's pretty intense writing and most of the stuff I've read on this theme has been rather...bland. :/
I saulte you on your amazing talent you have pleased him

I'll hook you up to Genesis -The Evil Version sometime you have pleased him

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Re: Eden

Post by lyrical_mess on Tue 17 Mar 2009, 10:28 pm

SHYTE.

I like...

Actually, before I read this or Cosmo's thing, I wrote this thing about...a month and a half ago called "Sin". Similar theme, I guess. Maybe its just the time to be writing about Eden. hmm...

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