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Imprisonment

Post by LightningRod on Fri 20 Feb 2009, 8:08 am

…Imprisonment…

Steel, cold, harsh, sparkling.
Against my broken, sore skin.
Shivers…right through the spine,
through the mind like a blade of ice, as I stare…
at infinite silver, daring, eloquent.
For this is imprisonment.

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Re: Imprisonment

Post by frayed ends on Fri 20 Feb 2009, 8:10 am

i really like this ^___^

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Re: Imprisonment

Post by Laceration Adrisole. on Fri 20 Feb 2009, 5:52 pm

Aerin, this is amazing. It's bold and truthful to the point of being chilling.

-loves your poems- OMGOMGYAYAYAYAY

I like the way the ending line sums up the poem too -loves- I can't describe it properly but it's original and just fits perfectly.

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Re: Imprisonment

Post by LightningRod on Fri 20 Feb 2009, 11:57 pm

-loves-
Thanks you have pleased him
Will be more on the way you have pleased him

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